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DRAGON'S TALE

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In general the image is great and from the composition this close-up is far better cropped than the full view. It is evident, as much as in your other "cyborg" or "robot" related works that there is an expertise in creating 3d elements that show metallic elements very good. The only thing that bothers that this isn´t a consistent feature in any of your images. To be more precise: some parts look like if they were bodypaintings (her face for example), some look really 3-dimensional (her neck) while other parts just look flat (the blue rim lights on the right side of the model.)

Another point for critique might be the dummy text that is displayed behind the wall, to have more impact and authenticity it would be that important to add some text related, or to underline your imagery. Otherwise it seems just as if you didn´t had enough time for each work to finish.

My suggestion is that you´d have to decide whether you are a photographer, manipulator, 3d-artist or graphic designer. Unfortunately, being a jack-of-all-trades isn´t beneficial to your art in the long run. You can benefit from your knowledge of each specializations, but your work could be that much better if you would invest more time in less images, instead of many with half-baked detail.
Looking forward to new works!
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supermarioART Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing creation!;-)
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Player-Designer Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Very nice.
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polyfreak Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Moar of that model please, she looks more like jessica alba than jessica alba does. Nothing personal Jessica.
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kongvmax Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
love it :D
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XIXsinisterXIX Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
reminds me of the Cyborg from Ghost In The Shell!
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Vitaly-Sokol Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Professional Photographer
Never seen before. Do u recommend it to see?
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XIXsinisterXIX Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
yeah its a series and it also has a couple movies, if you're into anime and sci-fi its the perfect show for you to watch!
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ChaosFay Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Professional General Artist
I second that. A much more realistic and believable image.
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XIXsinisterXIX Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Exactly! This is the greatest deviation i've seen so far.
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